@7foreverBTS_
The moment i read the line "Please don't hurt me" at the thumbnail i immediately got flashback of Bride Of Devil, my top favourite series. Y/n harwin. And this One shot—God this is so damn Beautiful!!! In this series you made his character less cruel with Y/n, yet your way of describing his character left me shivering. I couldn't breathe, You written this one shot so beautifully that now i felt like i needed to read it again just to cry some more. Bride of devil is one of the bestest dark romance series I've ever read in my life, and honestly i wouldn't mind reading it hundreds of times. Thank you for this one shot :) got reminded of my favourite couple again, couldn't stop myself from crying at how beautiful your writings are always. Thank you for your hard work, Jaz. I Love you so damn much >3🖤
@anushanizam8095
This freaking shot needs a bonusssss ❤
@moon_dynasty
It needs a bonus please Jazz.. I don't know if she even knows his name or not.. Maybe yes? maybe not? She hasn't said his name even for once here... I wish they would get married, so she doesn't need to feel conflicted about what to name their relationship. So she could finally put a name on it even she doesn't needs it to... Please please please... make a bonus of this masterpiece please... 🥺
@BTSARMY7KINGS702
You know what I love about your writing or you..is...you put every effort to make your readers happy....this is not the first time I am reading your masterpiece....and you understand what your readers love to read...either it is a dark romance or any other oneshot....I always wish till I am alive I will keep reading your work and may God bless you with health and prosperity....😊
@a_v4
It took me nearly 2 hours to complete with me constantly crying and wiping, giving a bit of relax then again crying..its written beautifully amazing
@Dimpiiiiiiiiiiii
Ahhhhhh The pain, the love, the fear, the understanding.... You're really a goddess of writing jaz!!🫠🎀
@lachimolala950
this is so well written sooo good omg it did somewhat remind me of bod but this jungkook sooo good😭😭jas you slay even with one shots, this was like a whole movie i was lost in their lives
@VanshikaKhandelwal-sb1sj
You won't believe i just came to yt really wanted a dark romance oneshot and here u are. U always are there! 😭😭🤚🤚
@MSREEKALPA
Pretty din't stop men from hurting you. If anything, it made it worst. Alas! How true it is ....there are soo many lines i want to mention in today's episode which held my heart gripping Jasmine. She was helpless , harassed by men.....she had learned enough from him, how to walk with pride, how to sneer instead of smile when faced with disrespect. He wasn't a saviour, he wasn't good, or better than those men. But he wasn't going to let those men touch her, he'd ruin the world before he let that happen and if that ment becoming the villain in her story...so be it ......she din't need to bow anymore to disgusting men who throw money around like ownership. she would hold her head high and walk among everyone else, because she was no less than any one 👑👑👑👑 He avenged every men who had laid eyes on her, who touched her inappropriately, those who put her on for sale, her father who's a complete bastard died, the professor is also going to face the same brutal fate.....lousy bastards deserve those kind of punishments in the most brutal way 👏👏👏👏👏 This kind of got me to episode 11 of one rule, were the graves of innocent women were found, were they met the brutal fate despite of obeying all the damn orders of those pixels....and y/n saying, these were all innocent, once happy women who din't deserve this ...these were women whose lives had been stolen....she wanted nothing more than to see the blood of all these devils pouring at her feet, for stealing precious lives. Jasmine, darling how do you write all these lines, which depicts the sheer reality of the dark world....where nothing seems green and innocent anymore .....everything is wrapped up in lies, in blood and in wickedness of traps and plans .....were it takes you nowhere but to destruction, straight to hell..... I'm happy that you are penning this down and teaching us how the underworld works , the horrors women go through....just everything about it shakes up my heart. This episode for me smelled like Jasmine , something darker underneath and at the same time setting my heart on fire🔥, making my heart flutter with every word, line and sentence....every line shoots up directly to my heart.....the women in your ff, especially in dark romance , has completely different aura.....they go through hell, deal with worst situation only to attain heaven at last💫🌠✨🌌 Jasmine, Hun... what are you doing to me ? You are my precious jewel....the treasure i found which i will cherish you untill my very end....keep you in my heart, safe ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️. This episode is so well written. I loved every bit of it beyond the lines of horizon.💙💙💙... I had to pause the episode to absorb every line, every word and then again start to read further, thats how much emotional it was for me. Jasmine, how are you doing ? Are you doing fine sweetheart?......please take care of yourself well, eat well, sleep well, and don't ever stress much.....know that you are soothing my heart and i dont want to stop making memories with you 💞💞💞 I'm sending a big hug to keep you warm and safe, I hope it reached you 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😍😍😘😘😘💝💝💝💗💗🤗🤗.
@meu-q5f
it was awesome as always author , totally loved it :yougotthis::yougotthis:💜💜
@NidaQadeer-j6b
I was actually missing u and here u posted 😭
@ParkYaksha
OMFGGG!! wtf was thattt- are u being fr?? are u human?? how can u write such a work of art then?? goshh eonnie ur so good at thiss like fr.. u had me in damn tears and the slow burn istg was slow burning sooo welll even the plot was crazy good.. so good that i actually felt tingless.. IM GONNA DIE IF WE DONT GET A BONUS FOR THIS! ill be waiting until then. Also its not just that its the damn efforts u put in to even the smallest details of the story wether describing the emotions, background or situation that makes such a great impact on my poor lil heartueee~ may u grow more n more cuz an underrated author like u deserves more until then, ~ ur lovelyy fan<3
@yukta-05
No words of mine can convey the feeling in my heart, just love you author 💓
@Rain_ot7_princess
Gosh!! So good Jasmine🖤 I loved it for real!! 💓 I was really waiting for you to drop another masterpiece and here it is.. Love ya' to the moon and back ❤
@Tanjiro-nm7sc
SKSKSKSKS. God! I'm freaking 4 hours late but dammit! I'm extremely excited!!! Especially more excited after knowing that this is inspired by Bride of Devil.
@moon_dynasty
It was so soo good!! Each and every story written by you are unique, special and masterpieces themselves.. The background musics are so wholesome and soothing.. I really can't express it in words how marvelous it is!!! Hats off of your talent Thank you so so soo much for this beautiful masterpiece.. Love you so much Jazzy... Take care of yourself
@doublebunnyofficial695
Will always be greatful, I love when I've nothing and everything on my mind at once and you post something, it makes me Relax, I love your writing ♡
@HafsaKhan-h9n
My slay queen is hereeeeeeeeeee.
@RaniKumari-fe1pp
I mean I don't know how can I express it was just too good that ahhhhhhhhhhh. awesome ❤❤❤
@Jazfics